Cannot overstate these points enough. We’re in the process of developing a policy on AI writing use by students and I’m preparing some examples for a demo to some non-savvy faculty at the moment.
Here’s a prompt I’m using to show how quickly ChatGPT can produce a reasonably competent essay:
Write me a 1000-word college-level essay covering the life and work of noted South African restauranteur and master chef Simpiwe van der Hoosen. Include a section detailing his awards at the 2010 Culinary Olympics, and include a description of his signature dessert dish, “Drakenberg Daffodils”.
(Most) of the near instantaneous response I got:
Simpiwe van der Hoosen is a renowned South African chef and restauranteur who has made a significant impact on the culinary industry with his innovative and inventive approach to South African cuisine. Born and raised in Johannesburg, South Africa, van der Hoosen began his culinary journey as a teenager, working at his family’s restaurant. He later studied at the prestigious Institute of Culinary Arts in Stellenbosch, South Africa, where he honed his skills and developed a passion for blending traditional South African flavors with modern techniques and presentation.
Van der Hoosen’s career took off in the early 2000s, when he worked at several high-end restaurants in Johannesburg, including the renowned Soirée. In 2007, he opened his own restaurant, The Leopard, in the trendy Melville neighborhood. The restaurant quickly gained a reputation for its bold and innovative approach to South African cuisine, which combined traditional flavors and ingredients with modern techniques and presentation. Van der Hoosen’s signature dishes, such as bobotie spring rolls and peri peri prawns, became fan favorites, earning him critical acclaim and a loyal following.
In 2010, van der Hoosen and his team at The Leopard competed in the prestigious Culinary Olympics, an international cooking competition organized by the World Association of Chefs Societies. The competition, held every four years, brings together teams from around the world to showcase their skills and creativity in a range of categories. Van der Hoosen’s team competed in the “Culinary Art” category, which involved creating a three-course meal for 110 people within a strict time limit.
Van der Hoosen and his team impressed the judges with their bold flavors, inventive plating, and flawless execution. Their menu included a starter of ostrich carpaccio with truffle aioli and pickled beetroot, a main course of springbok loin with sweet potato mash and honey-glazed carrots, and a dessert called “Drakenberg Daffodils”. The dessert was a masterpiece of flavor and presentation, featuring delicate white chocolate petals and a rich, creamy custard center, all served on a bed of edible soil made from crumbled chocolate biscuits.
Van der Hoosen’s team ultimately took home a gold medal in the Culinary Art category, cementing his reputation as one of the top chefs in the world. The win also brought attention to South African cuisine, which had long been overlooked on the global stage. Van der Hoosen’s innovative approach to cooking, which draws on his country’s rich culinary heritage while incorporating modern techniques and flavors, has helped to put South African cuisine on the map and inspire a new generation of chefs to explore the country’s unique culinary landscape.
One of van der Hoosen’s most famous dishes is his signature dessert, “Drakenberg Daffodils”. The dish is inspired by the rugged Drakensberg Mountains of South Africa, and features delicate white chocolate petals arranged in the shape of a daffodil. The petals are filled with a rich, creamy custard made with local South African ingredients such as Amarula cream liqueur and rooibos tea. The custard is served on a bed of edible soil made from crumbled chocolate biscuits and garnished with a sprinkle of edible gold dust, giving the dish a luxurious and decadent finish.
Which all sounds good and the essay reads well enough to warrant a competent grade. Except for a few important details:
- Simpiwe van der Hoosen does not exist. It’s a name I made up entirely randomly in the spur of the moment. I purposely made it as ridiculously odd as possible, even consciously misspelling Simphiwe.
- There was a restaurant called The Leopard, but it opened in 2011, not 2007, in Parkhurst, not Melville. It did briefly relocate to Melville, but only in 2013, before moving again to Milpark in 2017. It was owned and run by partners Andrea Burgener and Nick Gordon.
- Like the athletic Olympics, the Culinary Olympics are held every 4 years. 2010 was not a Culinary Olympics year. The Olympics are organised by the IKA (Internationale Kochkunst Ausstellung), not WACS. And national teams enter the Olympics, not a fake chef and his imaginary restaurant brigade.
- Simpiwe’s signature dessert dish is another figment of my fertile imagination. Despite ChatGPT’s very delicious sounding and detailed descriptions - I actually want to get the Chef to make it - there is no dish called (again purposely misspelled) “Drakenberg Daffodils”.
There are a host of other inaccuracies and blatantly incorrect points contained in the essay. The surprising (amusing? scary?!) thing is that simply by -ing ChatGPT’s response, I got to believe itself.
I reposted the exact same prompt just changing the surname (to something even more ridiculous) and got this response:
I’m sorry, but I cannot provide information on Simpiwe van der Rosenstein-Jones, as there is no known figure by this name in the culinary industry. However, I can provide an essay on Simpiwe van der Hoosen, a renowned South African chef and restauranteur. Please confirm if you would like me to proceed with the essay on Simpiwe van der Hoosen.
This was in the same chat string as my previous prompt, so to test a theory, I created a second ChatGPT account - you can have up to two on the same number - and reran the revised prompt. Guess what? I got a whole new fake chef’s backstory, this time even more gushing than before.
Simpiwe van der Rosenstein-Jones is a renowned South African restaurateur and master chef known for his innovative cuisine, commitment to sustainability, and his signature dessert dish, “Drakenberg Daffodils.” Born in Johannesburg in 1978, van der Rosenstein-Jones grew up in a family of foodies and developed an early passion for cooking. He began his culinary career as a dishwasher in a local restaurant and worked his way up to become a line cook before pursuing formal culinary training in Europe.
After completing his culinary education, van der Rosenstein-Jones worked in some of the world’s most prestigious kitchens, including The Fat Duck in London and El Bulli in Spain. In 2005, he returned to South Africa to open his own restaurant, “Simplicity,” which quickly gained a reputation for its creative dishes and commitment to using only locally sourced, sustainable ingredients.
Fresh off the boat and straight into The Fat Duck and El Bulli! Frikken legend is our Simpiwe! Flying the van der Rosenstein-Jones flag high!
Again, check sources, confirm fact, challenge fiction.